What can you do,
When you lose Something You never Had;
Whom can you curse,
When you dont even believe in that damn god;
What can you do of pain,
When you know the cure but....;
As You know things would never be Same,
Even if the world change.........
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Good one!!
I hope this is not true because if it is then u missed out on someone who is obviously quite special. This is a beautifully written piece describing lost..... If this poem could dance it would be dancing to the rhythm of the words right now.
This is so original. Short, with a definite message.
"As You know things would never be Same,
Even if the world change........."
hmmmm....poem is GOOD....you are improving man...day by day...this reflects in each of your new poem...
somehow i think this line would be more appropriate as
"As You know things would never be Same,
Even if this world remains unchaged...."
hmmmm nice poem
beautifully written
vaise kaunse vali ke liye likha hai
As Iron Maiden has said.. "Nothing can you contemplate would ever be same.. every second is a new spark, sets you afflame"
Cheers
No matter how busy you are, you must take time to make the other person feel important and also u deserve it...
u r a gem...
Appreciative words are the most powerful force for good on earth!
Sorry for being late...in praising ur poems...
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