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"be yourself imitation is SUICIDE"
Y waste time on imitating!
wen there so much new and
exciting to do!
Y fake others
when u can be proud YOU!
Y creep into someone else's skin
Wen it could be more terrifying than u can even think!
Y not discover
the truth inside YOU!
Than to commit suicide
by imitating a fool u never knew!
A small lines i wrote few days back in someones scrapbook.......don't know if they can pass of as poem but.... who gives a damn till Friends like you go through it and give me feedback........hey friend thanx for the title
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many Friends asked why the Heading "Casus belli" is called so because "its all about internal war........
9 comments:
interesting poem..bt dint really get how does ur title make sense///
good try!!!!!
SHABAAS!!!!!!!!
Short and sweet poem
very nice!
Just staters stuff.... but nice one ..... and i'll show u my didi's poem as well, she write good poems.
hey tat waz a gud start..keep it up u'll be a great poet one day....hahhahahaha...
Keates or Byron?
though i hv gvn u the comments...but then as u insisted fr the documented feedbk,,,,here u go :p
i liked the idea of the poem...though it can b edited a bit (being a Content Editer that cudnt go un-noticed)...a good poem indeed fr a starter...
hmmm... nice n intereting short poem...
but how true...
ppl waste soooooooo much tym tryin to imitate others....
I liked it as I could make some sense out of it. Very Good.
Keep it up. Looking forward to some more meaningful stuff.
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